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Feast on my flesh, feast on my flesh
You are a boy whose been bartered and blessed
Cool is this tongue that talks of my youth
But don't smolder this sweet tooth

Fore' this heart can't be sold
And though it sounds nice, besting sugar and spice
Don't feast on my flesh, for the heart is the vice

Beautiful one, boy whose known me
Crept up my frame, sent chills greedily

You are a boy whose been bartered and blessed
But why slight my life with this score through my chest,
Don't you know boy
That a heart there, rests…
:iconisabellamichel:
This is a not-love poem. :heart: A scandal. A hypocrisy. Entrancing confusion.

And love?

Yea. Gots nothin' to do with it.

Just happy that's all.
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:iconlayrablack:
That one is a bit strange, isn't it Bella?? I mean, gramatically.. hahaha

Yet it's... I couldn't describe it. I don't know why, the rythm reminds me of old-style songs, dunno :P
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~IsabellaMichel Nov 19, 2010  Student Writer
:lmao: Yes. It's strange, but it's grammatically correct. I just didn't want it to flow, I guess. I wanted it to be choppy and screwed up. :lmao: Jaja.
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:iconlayrablack:
I love it!!! :love:
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:iconisabellamichel:
~IsabellaMichel Nov 21, 2010  Student Writer
Gracias!!!!!!! :glomp: P.S. Get my letter yet?!?!?! O.o
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:iconsongfisher:
Oh, you're diction and syntax is admirable!
Beautifully put.
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:iconisabellamichel:
~IsabellaMichel Jul 21, 2010  Student Writer
Thank you very much! :heart:
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:iconmakgirl1234567:
bella i miss you so! i text you never text me anymore
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:iconisabellamichel:
~IsabellaMichel Jun 14, 2010  Student Writer
I just texted you!
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:iconmirror-to-the-world:
Absolutly wonderfull. i xspecially love your opening. Im so glad to see you havent loss your touch:clap:
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