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Feast on my flesh, feast on my flesh
You are a boy whose been bartered and blessed
Cool is this tongue that talks of my youth
But don't smolder this sweet tooth

Fore' this heart can't be sold
And though it sounds nice, besting sugar and spice
Don't feast on my flesh, for the heart is the vice

Beautiful one, boy whose known me
Crept up my frame, sent chills greedily

You are a boy whose been bartered and blessed
But why slight my life with this score through my chest,
Don't you know boy
That a heart there, rests…
This is a not-love poem. :heart: A scandal. A hypocrisy. Entrancing confusion.

And love?

Yea. Gots nothin' to do with it.

Just happy that's all.
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LayraBlack Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2010
That one is a bit strange, isn't it Bella?? I mean, gramatically.. hahaha

Yet it's... I couldn't describe it. I don't know why, the rythm reminds me of old-style songs, dunno :P
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IsabellaMichel Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2010  Student Writer
:lmao: Yes. It's strange, but it's grammatically correct. I just didn't want it to flow, I guess. I wanted it to be choppy and screwed up. :lmao: Jaja.
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LayraBlack Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2010
I love it!!! :love:
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IsabellaMichel Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2010  Student Writer
Gracias!!!!!!! :glomp: P.S. Get my letter yet?!?!?! O.o
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LayraBlack Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2010
Not yet!!!!
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Songfisher Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2010
Oh, you're diction and syntax is admirable!
Beautifully put.
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IsabellaMichel Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2010  Student Writer
Thank you very much! :heart:
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makgirl1234567 Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2010
bella i miss you so! i text you never text me anymore
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IsabellaMichel Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2010  Student Writer
I just texted you!
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mirror-to-the-world Featured By Owner May 20, 2010
Absolutly wonderfull. i xspecially love your opening. Im so glad to see you havent loss your touch:clap:
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